Beautiful Mother

Jul 6 2008  | Views 215 |  Comments  (4)
Neha was happy and felt like on top of the world. She had won the Beauty Pageant in... Expand

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  vasudhamurthy posted 1 month ago

hi,
thanks for the  visit and comment
bye
vasudha



  ashualec posted 1 month ago

the story is good but i feel you should have focused more on Neha's self centredness o that readers can justify her husband ...

The story is sensitive though



  vasudhamurthy posted 1 month ago

Sir,
Thanks for the  visit and  your comment.  I  will follow your  advice next time and it is such small gestures from people like you which encourages us to write more .
Thanks once again,
vasudha 



  Muthu Sundararajan posted 1 month ago

Vasudha Jee !!

Base line of the story is very good. But if you could split your write up into small paragraphs and slightly increase the font size, readers would read without hinderence.

Keep writing more

all the best

 

 





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